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CatGirlSLP
So-Chan
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Im So-Chan! AKA CatGirlSLP! What about myself? Well...
1: Im a loser when it comes to animie couples. I just get so light headed!
2: My fav musican of all time is... no one anymore^^; theres so much talent in the world its hard to choose X3
3: JUSTIN BEIBER MUST DIE! Sorry about that... *cough cough* one direction too...
4: Im an Espio the Chameleon fangirl, a Ventus fangirl, a Ceil fangirl, a Britain fangirl, and a Kyoya fangirl
5: I like anime such as Soul Eater, Black Butler, Princess Tutu, Fruits Basket, and a whole lot more.
6: LONG LIVE WALT DISNEY!
7: Proud Pegasisiter!
8: My YouTube is MARIOvsSONICgirl
9: I read lemons, and doshinji and i dont care what i see BD
10: I am a tiger hear me RAWR!
Please look around and enjoy the art work:) Tell your friends about me, My goal is too become a very popular DA gal:D

Favourite genre of music: Pop/Hip-Hop/Rap
Favourite style of art: Manga/ Anime
Operating System: Dell/ ACER
MP3 player of choice: iPod Shuffle
Wallpaper of choice: Video Game/Anime/Vocaloid/Pony Characters
Skin of choice: Sandy Tan
Favourite cartoon character: Mario/Sonic/Mikey Mouse/Twilight Sparkel
Personal Quote: Life. Ask not what its meaning is, but why was it given to you?

What Soul Eater Character Are You?
What Soul Eater Character Are You?
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What Soul Eater Guy Is For You?
What Soul Eater Guy Is For You?
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Who Is Your Ouran Host Date?
Who Is Your Ouran Host Date?
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Which KH Character Is In Your Party?
Which KH Character Is In Your Party?
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What Kingdom Hearts Type Are You?
What Kingdom Hearts Type Are You?
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What Kingdom Hearts Character Are You?
What Kingdom Hearts Character Are You?
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Which Black Rock Shooter Girl Are You?
Which Black Rock Shooter Girl Are You?
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What Vocaloid Are You?
What Vocaloid Are You?
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What Eevee Evolution Are You?
What Eevee Evolution Are You?
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What Legendary Pokemon Are You?
What Legendary Pokemon Are You?
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My Little Pony Personality Test!
My Little Pony Personality Test!
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What Sonic Character Are You?
What Sonic Character Are You?
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What Kuroshitsuji Character Are You?
What Kuroshitsuji Character Are You?
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Hetalia! What Country Are You?
Hetalia! What Country Are You?
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Which Hetalia Guy Would You Date?
Which Hetalia Guy Would You Date?
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Cleaning up some old deviations, just so yall know.
  • Mood: Daily Needs
  • Listening to: Your OC Sucks Ep.61
  • Reading: The journal
  • Watching: The Screen
  • Playing: The Keyboard
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: Malk

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Now to be serious. This was one hell of a feet because I'm going to be honest, there's not alot of 'good' Vocaloid fanfiction out there. Which is sad to say because the franchise itself has so much potential, and you took full advantage of that. You could have gone with the Vocaloid highschool route, or the medevil AU which alot of people like, or just a simple Vocaloid origin story. Not only did you combine it all into one but you manage to create this world, city, and characters that we all know but just feels so refreshed and new. Oh and lets not forget the fact that you basically wrote an ENTIRE CULTURE. The Seruva was one of the most interesting fictional cultures I've read in a long time, very rich and just gave off a sense of legacy and pride. As well as their religion and their ties with music which just fits SO well with the Vocaloid franchise (songs used in the story: expertly picked btw) The clashing forces I loved to. The traditional culture vs the modern technological society, where as in most anime based media your either strictly in magic or technology so its a delight when we get to see both at once. Now characters. For the most part, all characters were delightfully in character. Miku is still a lovable diva, Rin and Len are of course Rin and Len, Luka carries herself very properly and Gakupo is... a sophisticated dork for lack of a better word. And of coarse Kaito Shion, the precious cinnamon roll who is too good for the human world. Too pure. But then there were the characters who's personalities you altered a bit for the sake of the story (which I dont personally mind since its Vocaloid and your allowed to get away with that in some cases) Leon and Lola, superb bad guys. 'BigSweet' OP cyborg people umm yes please! And then there's Gumi. Mother. Fucking. Gumi. I LOVE what you did with her character. Basically a semi crazy scooter chick who talks in slang despite being a cute little shortie? YES! SOMETHING BESIDES ANOTHER GENERIC BUBBLY GIRL! MANY THANKS! As far as writing is concerned I thought it was superb. I personally love long chapters of a good story but that may a personal thing. Your voice and description is top notch I felt like I was reading a battle scene in real time. You never dwelled on little things and kept the story going at a proper pace.
And now for the critiquing part. Where there's... not really much to say. I mean save the few grammatical errors I caught in previous chapters, they were very small though do worry too much about it. My biggest critiques were based around story but even then there not really critiques at all because I like what you did in the story anyway. I understand the story is mainly meant to center around Kaito, but I kept feeling like I wanted Miku to do more. Yet thats kinda the point in the story that she does so much by doing actually not as much. Then there was Meiko's death which was mainly me going 'NOOO NOW THEY CANT COMPLETE THE RAINBOW!' but within the stories cannon it was a smart move so as to show the amount of sacrifice that took place.
Overall this was phenomenal. The world and events you've created are so rich and colorful I'm tempted to write fanfiction of a fanfiction. This is in my opinion the Vocaloid equivalent of a Fall Out Equestria, deserving enough of its own fandom. I hope you work hard on your future writing, never stop. You do have potential, you do have talent, so never doubt yourself and keep moving forward<3
Kagiso (MLP OC) by CatGirlSLP
Kagiso (MLP OC)
I got a small fanfiction under development and doing some fan character developments as well. Kagiso is my late installment, not that i assume you were waiting for anything else... Ponies are not my forte, and I'm mostly looking for critique on design, not actual art skill ^^'

Bio:
Full Name: Kagiso
Species: Zebra
Special Talent: Learning? (His cutie mark represent more of his personality then talent)
Big Mac Height/ Young Adult
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Kagiso's homeland is a country known as Neighthiopia. His family lived in a large open plain tribe, and from a very young age he had always loved learning. Kagiso excelled in school and was a very popular colt among his classmates. One day while he assisted his teacher with cleaning the classroom he came across a few books on Equestrian and Saddelrabian culture. His teacher let him borrow them and he finished both in the span of a week, when he shared everything he had learned from the books he earned his cutie mark (Fun fact: Kagiso's cutie mark is actually an African symbol for knowledge. lame i know but i didn't want to give him something boring like a book) Ever since then Kagiso studied other cultures and world history until his teachers had nothing more to teach him. So when he reached his teens he decided to move to Equestria as an exchange student to learn more. Thats when he moved to Ponyville, meeting his tenet family and his now good friend, Free Speech who he now lives with as a room mate traveling around Equestria with him as well.
Likes:
Research/ Peace and Quiet/ Children/ Coffee
Dislikes:
Lazing around/ Obnoxiously loud noises/ Bugs/ Sour Foods
Pros/Cons:
Kagiso is a very kind and gentle soul, he's always looking out for everyone and puts everyone's interest before his own. And when push comes to shove he can be the big scary dude his friends need at the right time. But because he's still adapting to Equestrian life, even to this day there are some things he still doesn't quite understand. As a result this can make him a bit naive, easily gullible, and sometime gives him a bit of a short fuse. While he may seem calm and collected on the outside, on the inside he's exploding.
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Free Speech (MLP OC) by CatGirlSLP
Free Speech (MLP OC)
I got a small fanfiction under development and doing some fan character developments as well. Free Speech is my second installment. Ponies are not my forte, and I'm mostly looking for critique on design, not actual art skill ^^'

Bio:
Full Name: Free Speech
Species: Earth
Special Talent: Defusing Arguments/Making Peace Between Ponies
Average Height/ Young Adult 
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Free Speech was born and raised in Ponyville, his mother was a pink mare and he inherited her mane color as well. As a result a certain colt used to tease him a lot in school for his 'pink hair'. Finally, Speech approached the colt asking why he teased Speech so much, only to find out he had been jealous because Free Speech got better grades then him. Free Speech offered to help him with his studies and the two made amends. Free Speech earned his cutie mark for this. A few years later Free Speech met Kagiso, a Zebra exchange student who began living with Speech and his family. Kagiso was ridiculed and sometimes shunned by the towns folk of Ponyville because of his heritage (This was around the time before Zecora's intro in the show) Speech's family was a very open minded household and accepted him quickly, so Free Speech found it bothersome how Kagiso was treated. With his communication skills he managed to convince most of the townsfolk to accept Kagiso, the two became like brothers and Free Speech decided to peruse equal treatment to all creatures of Equestria (I.E. Zebras, Bat Ponies, Griffons, Dragons, ect.) Free Speech and Kagiso traveled all over Equestria, holding petitions, and demonstrations across the different towns and cities.
Likes:
Casual Conversation/Jazz Music/ Dogs/ Stew
Dislikes:
Prejudice/ Loud and Obnoxious Noises/ Ice/ Alcohol
Pros/Cons:
His neutral face is very cold so most ponies assume his personality to be so at first glance, when in reality he actually very kind and humble but just tends to not show much emotion. He's often very blunt and doesn't take into consideration how blunt he is sometimes which can effect his conversations with other ponies. While hes friendly with many ponies he doesn't really consider alot of them his 'friends' but more like 'close aquaintences,' save Kagiso. Sometimes though his bluntness can have a positive effect since it often shows his sincerity, and often adds to the humor when he says a funny joke in a bland voice (Note: Remember when Pinky Pie said; "Laughs dont come in barrels, they come from inside you as your bodies natural response to delight"? Thats his personality)
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Cleaning up some old deviations, just so yall know.
  • Mood: Daily Needs
  • Listening to: Your OC Sucks Ep.61
  • Reading: The journal
  • Watching: The Screen
  • Playing: The Keyboard
  • Eating: nothing
  • Drinking: Malk
Literacy (MLP OC) by CatGirlSLP
Literacy (MLP OC)
I got a small fanfiction under development and doing some fan character developments as well. Literacy is my first attempt and hoping to earn some critique on her character. Ponies are not my forte, and I'm mostly looking for critique on design, not actual art skill ^^'

Bio:
Full Name: Literacy
Species: Unicorn
Special Talent: Writing
Average Height/ Young Adult 
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Literacy was born in Phillydelphia, and after writing a charming short story for a class project, earned her cutie mark in writing. Ever since then she had a dead set dream on writing her own novel, but heavily lacked inspiration. Because of this, she constantly gets herself into wacky situations in her quest for inspiration, causing her to become some what of a trouble maker among the locals. This is also influenced by her personality in which she is very sweet and sincere but a bit over eccentric and overly analyzing. She has few friends due to this since only so many ponies can keep up with her personality. She writes short stories in her spare time but never so much to the liking of her dream novel plot. When she became an adult she set out to find inspiration elsewhere, causing a bit more mayhem with her antics across Equestria, until finally finding Ponyville where she would soon find the inspiration she had search so many years for...
Likes:
Writing/ Humid days/ Scented Candles/ White Chocolate
Dislikes:
Heavy Work/ Cold Weather/ Dust(Dirt)/ Cauliflower 
Pros/Cons:
She is kind and sincere and loves her family dearly. She is loyal to the little friends she has and would go out of her way to help them. But on the other hand she is overly eccentric and when she's on her 'inspiration hunt' she will often get into trouble disrupting businesses, sneaking into shows she can't afford, and all around causing mischief. She can also be very persistent in her goals and often doesn't know when to take a hint and move on. Sometimes when this happens her motivation to find inspiration plummets and she'll go through a serious case of writers block which have lead to many an 'ice cream in bed' nights. However it doesn't take much for her to get up on her hooves again write some more.
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Rebochan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch and the badge :)
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CatGirlSLP Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
No problem beautiful~<3
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KiraiMirai Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the favourite on R.I.P Monty Oum (1981 - 2015)
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CatGirlSLP Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you friend... after everything that's happened it really mean a lot^^
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Kiyomi-chan16 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the watch! Spin :heart:
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CatGirlSLP Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome bro! :iconbrohugplz:
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tohruXkyo323 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey you saw the new chapter of A Fruits Basket Christmas Carol?
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tohruXkyo323 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

So you might notice on my journal add I'm planning to write a fruits basket Christmas special fanfic titled A Fruits Basket's Christmas Carol.

 

Please message me back soon.

 

(I'll might start writing during the end of November and work my way to till X-Mas)

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TerraKuman97 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I saw you have an OC that's Kid's mother. I have an OC that's his Aunt, Lady Life. ^^ She's Death's sister.
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CatGirlSLP Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL that's awesome! X3
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